Novice to Nominee! First Scripts That Conquered Hollywood

Novice to Nominee! First Scripts That Conquered Hollywood

I can’t count the times an aspiring writer complained to me, “But I read a script by So-and-So Famous Writer and they did that! And now you’re telling me I can’t?”

Yes, they did break so-called sacrosanct screenwriting rules. But you can’t break conventions until you have mastered them. 

These conversations inspired my last three ScriptMag columns on Breaking The Rules, particularly the dictatorial “Show, Not Tell.” Each explores a different type of masterfully breaking the rules, and offers examples from screenplays and teleplays by revered writers across genres and decades:

Breaking & Entering: Secrets Only the Pros Know – When to Break the Rules focuses on creating memorable character introductions.

Breaking & Entering: Seize the Reader – Pro Secrets to Creating Unforgettable Script Openings delves into electrifying openings that hook readers from page one and set the stage for the entire story.

And, possibly my favorite, Breaking The Rules Part 3: Pro Secrets – The Deft Cheat, explores techniques to create memorable scenes, evoke mood, and reveal unspoken character dynamics in engaging, cinematic, magical moments.

These articles showcase how A-List writers, having mastered the fundamentals, skillfully bend, break, and reinvent the rules with intention and finesse. Once your storytelling reaches that level, you can, too.

Read, Read, and Read

Rather than feeling frustrated, see these scripts as opportunities to learn. The great writers who came before you left a roadmap – scripts that demonstrate what they did and how they did it.

Aspiring writers no longer have to visit a museum to study the masters. While you can make an appointment at the Writers Guild Foundation Shavelson-Webb Library, or travel to the AMPAS Margaret Herrick Library, now thousands of scripts – dating back to the early decades of film – are readily available for free online, with just a little bit of sleuthing. 

Search for:

[TITLE] screenplay OR teleplay PDF download free

While some sites feel shady or host useless transcripts, award-nominated scripts are often officially released by the studios to promote them to the industry. Ignoring these resources is like trying to become a surgeon without studying anatomy or observing live surgeries.

Learning from the Masters

Throughout history, mastery required apprenticeship and often hardship. Michelangelo began apprenticing at 13. He studied the masters. He dissected cadavers to grasp the underlying musculature of the body before turning to sculpture. By 24 he had completed the Pietà. Michelangelo wanted to create a work he described as “the heart’s image.” His most famous sculpture, David, was completely when he was he was 29.

Studying and mastering the skills of the experts is your opportunity to dissect and examine what is beneath the surface of human emotion before you become a renowned sculptor. 

As a writer, you don’t need to cut up bodies or clean paint brushes, but you should study the master writers to grasp how they reveal what lies beneath the surface.

Essential Reading: Career-Launching Spec Scripts

To inspire your reading list, I’ve selected some of my favorite scripts by first-time screenwriters, whose debuts led to box office success, critical acclaim and even Academy Awards® for nominations for Best Original Screenplay.

Before the 1990s, many nominees had extensive experience in theatre or television. But the 90s were a Golden Era for spec scripts as studios were still eager to buy them in the 80s, leading an abundance of unique, original works. Bygone days for the industry, I’m afraid.

  • 12 Angry Men (1957) – Reginald Rose technically this won Best Adapted Screenplay, but it was based on Rose’s own original teleplay, so it’s my call to put him on this list
  • The Producers (1968) – Mel Brooks (Won)​ (What arena hadn’t Mel Brooks notched impressive achievements prior to this, with a career that started on the Borsht Belt just after WWII and flourished in television and theatre in the 1950s. Nevertheless, this was his first feature film, beating 2001: A Space Odyssey by Stanley Kubrick and Faces by John Cassavetes.)
  • Breaking Away (1979) – Steve Tesich (Won)​
  • Moonstruck (1987) – John Patrick Shanley (Won) (note he had written and continues to write numerous successful plays)
  • Thelma & Louise (1991) – Callie Khouri (Won)
  • The Fisher King (1991)Richard LaGravenese (Won)
  • The Sixth Sense (1999) – M. Night Shyamalan
  • American Beauty (1999) – Alan Ball (Won)
  • Being John Malkovich (1999) – Charlie Kaufman
  • Gosford Park (2001) – Julian Fellowes (won)
  • My Big Fat Greek Wedding (2002) – Nia Vardalos
  • Little Miss Sunshine (2006) – Michael Arndt (won)
  • Juno (2007) – Diablo Cody (Won)
  • The Big Sick (2017) – Emily V. Gordon & Kumail Nanjiani
  • Get Out (2017) – Jordan Peele (Won)
  • Promising Young Woman (2020) – Emerald Fennell (Won)

In The Beginning

What fascinates me most is each writer’s origin story: Each “in the beginning” is different. Some writers were ready to quit – just one more idea that they simply had to write. Others were just starting out. Some wrote a first draft in days, others went through hundreds of versions.

As a special treat, here are some enlightening interviews with the writers on how these specs came into being, their writing, and what they want to say with their stories:

John Patrick Shanley by Craig Gholson for BOMB

Callie Khouri on Creating Character: Thelma & Louise interview with Syd Field

Richard LaGravenese and The Fisher King by Christopher McKittrick in Creative Screenwriting

M. Night Shyamalan on Screenwriting by Daniel Argent in Creative Screenwriting

Interview with Alan Ball on American Beauty in Spiritual Teachers via Amazon.com

Charlie Kaufman: why I wrote Being John Malkovich by Charlie Kaufman in The Guardian

Interview: Julian Fellowes: Actor, writer by Ashley Coates in How Did They Do It

Nia Vardalos on My Big Fat Greek Wedding’s Slow Burn, Rising Before 4 A.M., and the Very Real Merits of Windex by Elizabeth Logan in Glamour

‘Closet Screenwriter’ Arndt comes into the light by Anne Thompson in The Hollywood Reporter

Ex-stripper beats odds with ‘Juno’ by Jeff Baenen in Cape Cod Times

The Big Sick’s Kumail Nanjiani and Emily V Gordon: ‘In America, the idea of a cross-cultural relationship is still controversial’ by Tim Lewis in The Guardian

‘Get Out’ Sprang From An Effort To Master Fear, Says Director Jordan Peele transcript via Fresh Air with Terry Gross and Tonya Mosley on NPR

Emerald Fennell’s ‘Promising Young Woman’ Doesn’t Let Anyone Off The Hook transcript via Fresh Air with Sam Briger on NPR

Learn from the Good and the Bad

While I urge you to consume a steady diet of good scripts, don’t shy away from the bad ones. Analyzing where and why they fall short will sharpen your skills and strengthen your storytelling techniques. Growing up, once in the theatre, I never walked out of a bad film; there was always something to learn.  

Your best education is right at your fingertips! Start reading, studying, and dissecting.

Master the rules.

Then break them with style.

Screenwriters Speak: Themes That Fascinate A-List Writers

Screenwriters Speak: Themes That Fascinate A-List Writers

Theme is a strong tool that can power your writing. Identifying your Personal Thematic, is a concept I first learned from producer and screenwriter Meg LeFauve, and story consultant, Laurie Hutzler that can impact your entire writing process.

Themes add meaning and resonance to your story. That which moves you has the power to move others.

Writing a piece that speaks to your Personal Thematic is motivating and energizing. It gets you excited and keeps you going – even when the going gets tough – long into the tedium of rewrites. It brings focus to the story that enables you to make choices faster and more effectively.  And it powers your work because it taps into core concepts and beliefs that you desperately want to express – to share with the world.  

That is how important Personal Thematic is to elevating your writing.   

Screenwriters Speak on Themes

Over the course of my career as a film industry exec, and as a producer, it has been a great privilege to work with truly talented writers. What I have learned has been invaluable.

I wanted to bring this kind of knowledge to the students in my online seminar, Screenwriting Elevated. So I started featuring a Surprise Guest Speaker each month. I choose a writer whose work they class has read as part of the monthly assigned scripts. I might show a clip or read a scene from their work. And, admittedly, I like the added reveal of the students not knowing who the speaker will be!

Some are easy asks for me. Some are my Screenwriting Fangrrl idols, and just “the ask” made my heart pound a bit. All are incredibly articulate and very generous with their time, eager to answer any and all questions.

After the introduction, I ask just one question to get the ball rolling:

What themes – a character type, a dilemma, or a conflict, an idea – do you find yourself drawn to, again and again, in your work?

Of course, this goes straight for what fascinates me the most about the creative process.

I love hearing their answers! And I think you will too.

This show I’m working on right now that is my first foray into TV and streamers – I reached a point where I said, ‘I’ve got to do something that is just mine.” I literally took a year and half off during Covid, and worked on this on spec. I can think about this project, and I think it probably would echo in a lot of the other things that I’ve written as well.

What makes a human, human? What makes a human being a human? What are the aspects of us that are the best of us and worst of us? Is being human doing something noble in the face of danger? Or is part of humanity betraying supposedly everything you believe in to achieve some kind of goal?

These types of conflicts, these moral or ethical issues that exist in yourself, in each person, those are themes that intrigue me.

Issues of integrity. What is heroism? What is admirable in people?

There’s a western that I love, an early Sam Peckinpah western, Ride The High Country, that featured two aging actors, Joel McCrae and Randolph Scott, at the end of their careers, who had both been in a lot of westerns. They’re playing these older gunmen. In some ways it’s like the Unforgiven of its’ time. The Joel McCrae character has a line about the type of life that he’s lived, “I just need to enter my house justified.”

To me, it’s those kinds of issues: What is the code that you live by? How do you treat people? These are things that are important to me as a person too, but I like to explore those issues in stories.

Even in terms of someone trying to do the honorable thing, but also I’m totally fascinated by people who the exact opposite and who are capable of doing awful things for their own pleasure or greed.

That human dichotomy, that’s the stuff that fascinates me.

Mark Protosevich: The Cell, I Am Legend, Thor, Oldboy, Sugar

There’s something about humanity and human behavior why people act the way they do, and feel the way they do – that always intrigues me. For Fisher King, it was the 80s. I thought it was a really ugly decade. A decade of great narcissism and cynicism. And I saw this out there and so I decided to write something about that. About a character that was narcissistic and then, by the end of the story, committed a selfless act. 

The Fisher King, The Bridges of Madison County, Beloved

The other day, I was coming up with a plot, and I suddenly thought, this is exactly the same basic structure as eight other things I’ve written! The idea of an innocent person caught between other extreme factions. I would say that that’s a biggie. It’s totally unconscious, but I find that person likeable.

 

Also the idea of people being able to communicate or connect with people despite whatever is separating them. That is sort of our main job as writers – is to find something that you can connect with in every single character. I think that makes for better writing. 

 

I am particularly not in a genre. I tend to think that’s because whatever I see, I want to do. If I go into a plumbing supply store, I want to build something. So if I see a comedy, I want to do a comedy. If I see a thriller, I want to do a thriller. Partly because my model was William Goldman. When I was growing up he was really cool. And he would say, “Ok, I’m doing a western. Now I’m doing a political thriller. Now I’m doing The Right Stuff.” Now a war movie.” He was always changing genres. And I thought, that sounds like so much fun!

 

It’s my instinct to go to different genres and yet, I find the same themes in all the different genres.  

Fracture, Mad Money, Disfigured

I recently heard playwright, screenwriter and director John Patrick Shanley, interviewed by journalist Katherine Brodsky and had the opportunity to ask him my favorite question about themes. His answer was immediate and succinct: 

Characters who won’t give up, who are going to find a way.

Moonstruck, Joe Versus the Volcano, Doubt

When you get a chance to do what you love to do as a writer, especially in screenwriting, where you can come up with any story and write it – obviously the business is changing – but when I broke in in 1983, it was wide open. You really could dream up a story and write anything you were passionate about. That’s how I approached it. 

 

When you do that, you tend to draw from ‘what made you.’ Whether it’s things you were drawn to as a child – what molded you. Things you watched as a child, what stories you read at a young age, what you did with your free time.

 

All of those things combined, at least for me, to create a theme that I find runs through a lot of my work, which is man or woman’s place in nature, or man or woman against nature. Mainly it’s our relationship with nature. I’ve always explored that theme. It’s apparent in Last of The Dogmen. It’s apparent in Gorillas in the Mist

 

I grew up camping and loving the outdoors and spending a lot of time outdoors. I love wilderness. I love wild places. I love the idea that there are places in the United States where you can still hear a wild wolf howl, or where grizzly bears roam. 

 

This informed a lot of what I chose to write early in my career, and what I ended up writing later in my career. It still runs through my work today.

 

Forty years later, I’m still writing about the same themes. Because they’re important to me. And because they’re relevant to the world we’re living in today. Our relationship with nature. You can connect that to climate change. You can connect that to indigenous people that are disappearing, languages that are disappearing. What’s our relationship to that? 

 

That’s essentially what turns me on thematically in storytelling.

Gorillas in the Mist, Last of The Dogmen, Hunchback of Notre Dame, Tarzan, Atlantis: The Lost Empire, Brother Bear